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    The Plot Feed (Chapter 2)

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    Post by Takuso Tue May 26, 2009 10:02 am

    I guess it wouldn't hurt to throw this in there, its not like theres secrets revealed in the second chapter

    Events

    - The team run from the tournament after killing the winner, and find themselves lost in a desert.
    - A strange creature comes to them just as they are about to give up, it almost looks like a little bigger fire fly. We follow it and it leads us to a strange looking stone structure.
    - As we walk in, we are greeted by people who live in the sand, they have dark skin and hold strange weapons with emeralds and rubies embedded into the handles.
    - They take us to the "King," and we do not understand the language they speak.
    - So as they were about to throw us in their dungeon, a strange man comes in and tells the King not to throw them away. So instead they give us a room.
    - Strange things start happening, and the King blames it on us, from sandstorms to their magic malfunctioning.
    - The strange man that helped them earlier can speak their language. And he tells them that they have to leave because the King is going to kill them. The man tells them his name is Lyran, and he doesn't remember who he is, its just that he has a power that the sand people are fascinated with.
    - Lyran shows them the fire fly like thing that they followed to this building, he tells them that when he woke up with all his memories gone, that the little thing was the only thing he had, he calls it a "Pixie."
    - They find out a secret, that the sand people cannot go out at night, because the sun fuels their power, and the moon being the negative of the sun takes away their power, and turns them to dust.
    - They attempt to escape, but are found, and must fight the king.
    - They kill the King, and leave the place.
    - Lyran comes with them, and guides them out of the desert, when they ask him how he knows how to get out, Lyran tells them that he does not know.
    - When they get out, Alex decides to leave the group and report to Necro.


    Any problems Admins? Anything to add to the chapter or something?
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    Post by Nenga (Vito) Tue May 26, 2009 1:56 pm

    Im confused, when did all of this happen?
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    Post by Takuso Tue May 26, 2009 2:22 pm

    ...umm...right after chapter 1...this same thread is in the admin only topic, with some stuff added
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    Post by Sr Lyranardo IV Tue May 26, 2009 7:14 pm

    I think we should cut it off there, and tell everyone there individual plot feeds, then start on the story telling, we don't want to spoil everything! I also though we were going to start in the cold mountains, I wish to consult some things that I don't understand.
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    Post by Nenga (Vito) Wed May 27, 2009 12:05 am

    i thought they go to the town where vito is after that?
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    Post by Takuso Wed May 27, 2009 8:06 am

    in Chapter 3 they go to Vito's town
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    Post by Mirari Wed May 27, 2009 7:48 pm

    Sr Lyranardo IV wrote:I think we should cut it off there, and tell everyone there individual plot feeds, then start on the story telling, we don't want to spoil everything! I also though we were going to start in the cold mountains, I wish to consult some things that I don't understand.
    Ickle shot that idea...
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    Post by Takuso Thu May 28, 2009 10:48 am

    what? what did i shoot?
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    Post by Donnie Thu May 28, 2009 1:53 pm

    Takuso wrote:what? what did i shoot?
    Lyrans idea according to Mirari, but i didn't see anything about that.
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    Post by Mirari Thu May 28, 2009 5:12 pm

    Lyran said we should split soon after we meet, Ickle yelled at me when I said that that's what we were going to do.
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    Post by Sr Lyranardo IV Thu May 28, 2009 5:52 pm

    I was actually talking about how I thought I was a lone drifter and all of a sudden I'm a King and another reason is I though we would have a story line thread where we post like *Walks into room* "Oh no! MONSTER!" kind of style not blatantly giving out the facts for everyone to see, if we told every secret we would have no plot twist and I wouldn't be able to break the fourth wall.
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    Post by Takuso Thu May 28, 2009 8:50 pm

    hm, i see your point, maybe we will deal out the secrets in the chapters to the people who need to know rather than handing them to everyone

    (oh, and btw, you aren't the king, you help us kill the king)
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    Post by Mirari Thu May 28, 2009 10:13 pm

    Hey, Ickle, did Felix talk to you, if you use the ideas, can I know them or no?
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    Post by Sr Lyranardo IV Thu May 28, 2009 11:44 pm

    Oh, I read it wrong then...phew, because I had the entrance played out an everything, big huge fans move out of the way as you enter and I'm on a perch of golden thrones, with a milkshake in one hand.
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    Post by Mirari Fri May 29, 2009 12:46 am

    lol...
    Ickle, I want to talk to you about something in a later chapter, but you aren't responding on the thread...
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    Post by Takuso Fri May 29, 2009 11:26 am

    huh? what thread am i not responding to?

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